The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy  and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The line graph provides information about the carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions
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average per person in three different countries (United Kingdom,
Sweden
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, Italy, and Portugal) from 1967 to 2007.
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, the
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in Italy and Portugal maintained
increase
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an increase
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while
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in UK and
Sweden
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experienced
decrease
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. At the beginning of the period, the United Kingdom and
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became the most nation contributing C02 emissions which were just over 10
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for the former and around 9
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for the latter.
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, in 1977, there was a slight decrease in the UK and the
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kept decreasing until 2007 which was approximately 9
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. Meanwhile, there was a significant increase in
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by about 2
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in 1977 and a dramatic decrease at 7
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. The
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kept falling to just below 6
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at the end
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of the period.
On the other hand
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, in Italy and Portugal,
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being the lowest
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of contributing gas emissions in 1967, the figures kept raising until the end of the period. The
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jumped by around 4
tonnes
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for each state.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 79%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sweden, number, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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