The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy  and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line graph provides information about the carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions
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average per person in three different countries (United Kingdom,
Sweden
, Italy, and Portugal) from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, the
number
in Italy and Portugal maintained
increase
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while
in UK and
Sweden
experienced
decrease
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. At the beginning of the period, the United Kingdom and
Sweden
became the most nation contributing C02 emissions which were just over 10
tonnes
for the former and around 9
tonnes
for the latter.
Then
, in 1977, there was a slight decrease in the UK and the
number
kept decreasing until 2007 which was approximately 9
tonnes
. Meanwhile, there was a significant increase in
Sweden
by about 2
tonnes
in 1977 and a dramatic decrease at 7
tonnes
. The
number
kept falling to just below 6
tonnes
at the end
of the period.
On the other hand
, in Italy and Portugal,
although
being the lowest
number
of contributing gas emissions in 1967, the figures kept raising until the end of the period. The
number
jumped by around 4
tonnes
for each state.
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  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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