You and your friend have booked tickets to go to the theatre. You are now unable to go but have found another friend to accompany him/her instead. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: • explain why you can no longer go to the theatre with your friend • say who is able to go instead of you • tell them why you think this person would be good to go with.

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Dear Neha, How're you doing? I'm writing to inform you

I'd

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not be able to go to the theatre

instead

Riya our best friend from school will be joining you on that day. The reason behind my

unavailablity

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unavailability

availability

the

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unforseen

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unforeseen

family medical emergency has arisen which requires my immediate attention and presence. I assure you that

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situation is beyond my control and hope you'll understand it. As you may remember, Riya, our school best friend will be happily joining you for a movie, and I

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you don't have any problem with her.

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, she is totally free,

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, you can make some other plans with her after a movie including dinner and

late night

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talks. I think she will be the best partner to go with you because of having similar interests not only in movies but

also

in attire settings, So, would you mind me providing your contact details to her? So that she can call and ask you about the date and timing for a movie. I hope you will understand my situation and keep in touch in future. Yours Sincerely, Amanjot Kaur.

Submitted by amanjotkaur0303 on Thu Jul 04 2024

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To improve coherence, consider using more transitional phrases to guide the reader through your letter smoothly.

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Review your letter for minor grammatical errors and ensure clarity in all your explanations.

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Your letter maintains a friendly and polite tone, which is suitable for the situation.

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You have effectively explained the reason for your unavailability and provided a suitable replacement, addressing all points in the prompt.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear logical structure with a greeting, main body, and closing, making it easy to follow.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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8 paragraphs

188 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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