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Many students now have the opportunity to study in other countries. Studying abroad may bring some benefits to some students, but it also ha a significant number of disadvantages. Discuss both sides of the arguments and give opinion.

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Studying abroad possibility has advantages and drawbacks. Even though a vast number of
students
 afford to study far away from their homeland , it may cause a variety of disadvantages in long run. In
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 I will argue both sides and I will give my opinion on both sides. It is a good idea to start with the advantages of studying abroad that might outweigh the disadvantages in terms of introducing
students
 to a new culture and being mature . one of the most crucial benefits that how new cultures influence overseas
students
 and learning from different sources. For ,instance it is proven that studying foreign languages is much easier in native countries . the second idea to consider is that studying far away from
parents
 helps one to be more reliable and mature .
on the other hand
, there are negative points in studying in other countries
such
 as expenses and lack of support. Nobody can ignore the financial pressure conducted on
parents
 for paying for studying in foreign countries .
For example
 fees for studying dentistry at Glasgow University are 24000 pounds per year for international
students
,
while
 the same course costs only 1800 pounds for home-student.
Finally
, I claim that many
students
 miss the support that they used to gain from their
parents
. Many different types of research show the impact of homesickness on overseas
students
. In conclusion, whether to support studying in another country or oppose the notion , is very individual since ,the
parents
 have the financial possibility and the student has the strength to be far from
parents
 , being with another student from another culture is very beneficial
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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