You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: - apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner - explain why you have been so busy - arrange a time to visit

Dear Mary, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing to express my shame to you and say sorry because I didn't go to your house since your birthday. As you know, I'm late with my responsibilities regarding my studies so I had to take some time to concentrate and be more productive with my lessons. My teacher not only has scheduled three tests next month but

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there is too much homework to do. I would like to propose visiting you next weekend when I believe that will be more organized with my studies. In order to spend more time with you, you can organize some activities or a tour of your favourite churches. Looking forward to your response. Best regards, Franklin

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

125 words

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You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: - apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner - explain why you have been so busy - arrange a time to visit

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots. Is this a negative or positive development?

Nowadays, an increasing number of people with helath problems are using alternative medicine and treatment instead of visitiong their normal doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.