In the last few decades there have been more and more cases of famous peoples being hounded by the press. Some people think that famous people in the media have no right privacy. To what extend do you agree?

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Some individuals think that celebrities from past few decades do not have any personal

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as they are always being followed by

media

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everywhere because of their fame.

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, celebs

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want

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to track them and share their news so that their followers can be increased. I partially agree to the statement and in the below paragraphs we will discuss about the same.

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with, all the stars in order to maintain their fame need to have

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coverage on daily basis

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is not only needed just to increase their followers but

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to make their career better.

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:- The famous actor Shahrukh Khan asked

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to cover his daily routine for a month in order to promote his "Om Shanti Om" movie so that people should attract with his personality and eventually come to view his movie. Because, they are actors so they need public to be aware of the next upcoming things so that they can earn better and get more movies.

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, there are some who want to live in their personal

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and do not want others

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press to interfare in their life.

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:- Actors like "Nana Patekar" lives very simple life, never go on promotions but still have so many followers, even

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do not covers him because he want his privacy.

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, there are many others who lives in their own

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and do not allow press to interfare.

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, definetly one to promote something and get better results of his effort need to do promotions for which

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can help

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without

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as well you can do well by living in your personal

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. So I believe it is up to the celebs who always wants to be in

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can be there and other who doesn't want he can live as a normal common man life.

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Topic Vocabulary:

celebrity scrutiny
public interest
media scrutiny
free press
mental health issues
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In the last few decades there have been more and more cases of famous peoples being hounded by the press. Some people think that famous people in the media have no right privacy. To what extend do you agree?

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

You caused some damage to the kitchen area of your flat. Write a letter to your landlord explaining the following. •How the damage occurred •The extent of damage •What you would like to landlord to do.

Some companies prefer people to work in the office, while others facilitate their employees to work from home. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently.To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.