Write a letter to your neighbor (who is also your friend) about the damage that occurs to your car while he parks his car in the space allotted to you. In the letter, you should: Describe the damage Say how you feel about this problem. Suggest on actions he should take.

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Dear Ms Ana, I am writing to complain about the damage done to my

car

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's right

side

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mirror

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that I noticed when I left for work

this

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morning. I would say that

this

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incident happened

last

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night when you parked your

car

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in my allotted space. I am extremely disappointed with what happened. I just got my

car

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from the repair shop after it was repainted and now the right

side

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mirror

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paint is peeled off. To make matters worse, there is a noticeable dent that probably resulted from the impact when your

car

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hit the

side

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mirror

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. I would like to request an apology for the inconvenience that

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has caused me and to recompensate the payment

that is

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due for the repair of the said

side

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mirror

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. I look forward to your prompt reply and please let me know if my above request will be a problem. Yours sincerely, (signed) Alex

bambam.alexisMon Jan 30 2023

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

153 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

allocating
allotted space
damage
dents
scratches
repairs
responsibility
compensation
convenience
inconvenience
empathy
respect
resolve
mutual understanding
precautionary measures

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Write a letter to your neighbor (who is also your friend) about the damage that occurs to your car while he parks his car in the space allotted to you. In the letter, you should: Describe the damage Say how you feel about this problem. Suggest on actions he should take.

most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Popular events like football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option?

Some people feel that there is too much emphasis on getting an education, and that the government should spend money on leisure time activities for young people too. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people buy new models of phones, computers and other technology immidately while others prefer to buy after a while they launch. disuss both views and give your opinion.