some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members in the society. others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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These days, it is not uncommon to see young people misbehaving in the community and on various social media platforms. Whiles many are suggesting that
parents
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have failed to raise their kids to fit into society, others
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are blaming the school authorities for not training them well. Despite the fact that these children spend
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with their
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in school, personally, I believe that their guardians are solely responsible for their
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and as
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, they should take full responsibility. I will elucidate both views in
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essay and draw a conclusion.
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with, it is the duty of
parents
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to teach these young
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morals. Charity they say begins at home and these minors start learning wrongs and good things from their homes.
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, in a survey conducted in the western part of Africa, it was revealed that young people who were disrespectful in their societies and were abusing drugs had
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or guardians demonstrating similar attitudes. With
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, it is clearly understood that these minors learn most good and bad things from their homes and
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, when they see their elders portraying
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characters, they think they are good ways and copy them.
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, youngsters spend a
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of
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with their family and
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, these family members have ample
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to train them as compared to schools whereby their
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spend not more than 8 hours with them. on the hand, teachers
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have roles to play in their
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. At
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tender age, they listen to what their school teachers tell them a
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. Most of them believe that their masters are always right and tend to go by their orders.
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, school-going children between the ages of 5-7 years mostly repeat the actions and words spoken by their class
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. Again, some of the subjects studied by these pupils contain a
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of these morals, to illustrate, programs
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as religious and moral education
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social studies help to educate them on the do's and don'ts.
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, despite the fact that teachers
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have their roles in moral
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, it should not be their core duties because they spend small hours with these kids and
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, they have a
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of students in the classroom to take care of,
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they might not pay attention to each and every one. To summarize, both
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and
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have their roles to play in children's
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,
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, guardians must take it as their main duty to do so because they spend more
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with their kids at home and
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, the behaviour they put up is been learnt by their wards even before they start schooling.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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