Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All levels of education, from primary school to tertiary education should be free. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In
this
contemporary world, access to free education
is an inevitable topic. I vehemently agree that providing education
to children
should be the parent's responsibility and not be funded by anyone including the government. This
essay will expound on my point of view and give credible examples.
First of all, it is widely believed that parents
should be the ones responsible for their children
's education
. A man and a woman planning to build a family of their own should carefully plan how they will raise and support the needs of their children
. This
includes how to sustain the education
of their children
from primary school to tertiary level. An optimal example of this
can be planning on the number of children
a family should have in consideration of their financial status and which the parents
can sustain their child
's education
. Additionally
, at the early start of building their family, they should already invest in a trust fund allocated to their child
's education
. With this
, the education
of the child
is secure even if the future of the parents
holds some uncertainties.
Another point worth considering is that to provide free access to learning, the state should have allocated funds for this
. However
, the state's budget should be allocated to much more important sectors of society such
as quality healthcare systems and road infrastructures. No one can deny that there are more underdeveloped countries around the world than developed ones. Poor countries' government funds are not sufficient to provide a quality lifestyle for their people thus
, it will be difficult for the national government to additionally
shoulder the education
cost.
In conclusion, in my opinion, I believe that education
is every child
's right. However
, it should be the responsibility of the parents
to provide this
fundamental aspect of the child
's life.Submitted by bambam.alexis on
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