Open plan office no walls no barriers. Research has shown that the transportation of products and people are the main source of pollution. Some people believe government should be in charge of this, while others believe it is the fault of individuals. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
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It has been shown that the most of carbon
pollution
is from the transportation
of stuff and humans. It is considered by some people
that it is the government
's responsibility
to control it but others think it is the people
's duty.
According to
a study from Korea, there are over five million tons of carbon pollution
caused by transportation
a year and this
makes worse our environment. Mainly, this
part of pollution
is from business transportation
and private vehicles. However
, the number of private cars has increased in the last
decade and even more and more families have the desire to a
second car these years. Without a doubt, Add a missing verb
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this
situation will become more terrible if people
can not realise how they are affecting the earth negatively and stop purchasing more cars.
However
, the government
should also
take responsibility
. Many companies can not do business transportation
without the government
's permission and sometimes the government
will ignore their harmful pollution
for more economic improvement. Moreover
, the government
should also
make more effort to build better public transportation
to decrease the general public's demand for private cars, as it is true that some people
have no choice but to drive to work as there is no bus or train in their suburb. In my view, people
should have the awareness that some of their behaviours are harmful to the environment but the government
need to take more responsibility
to manage some business transportation
and provide more convenient public transportation
to people
.
In conclusion, it is the duty of both individuals and the government
to protect our own environment and decrease carbon pollution
but the government
should take more responsibility
to ensure that this
situation is under control and let the earth become better.Submitted by chenkaixu9119 on
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