Open plan office no walls no barriers. Research has shown that the transportation of products and people are the main source of pollution. Some people believe government should be in charge of this, while others believe it is the fault of individuals. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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It has been shown that the most of carbon
pollution
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is from the
transportation
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of stuff and humans. It is considered by some
people
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that it is the
government
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's
responsibility
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to control it but others think it is the
people
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's duty.
According to
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a study from Korea, there are over five million tons of carbon
pollution
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caused by
transportation
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a year and
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makes worse our environment. Mainly,
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part of
pollution
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is from business
transportation
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and private vehicles.
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, the number of private cars has increased in the
last
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decade and even more and more families have the desire to
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second car these years. Without a doubt,
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situation will become more terrible if
people
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can not realise how they are affecting the earth negatively and stop purchasing more cars.
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, the
government
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should
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take
responsibility
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. Many companies can not do business
transportation
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without the
government
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's permission and sometimes the
government
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will ignore their harmful
pollution
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for more economic improvement.
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, the
government
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should
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make more effort to build better public
transportation
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to decrease the general public's demand for private cars, as it is true that some
people
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have no choice but to drive to work as there is no bus or train in their suburb. In my view,
people
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should have the awareness that some of their behaviours are harmful to the environment but the
government
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need to take more
responsibility
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to manage some business
transportation
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and provide more convenient public
transportation
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to
people
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. In conclusion, it is the duty of both individuals and the
government
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to protect our own environment and decrease carbon
pollution
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but the
government
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should take more
responsibility
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to ensure that
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situation is under control and let the earth become better.
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