Open plan office no walls no barriers. Research has shown that the transportation of products and people are the main source of pollution. Some people believe government should be in charge of this, while others believe it is the fault of individuals. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

It has been shown that the most of carbon
pollution
is from the
transportation
of stuff and humans. It is considered by some
people
that it is the
government
's
responsibility
to control it but others think it is the
people
's duty.
According to
a study from Korea, there are over five million tons of carbon
pollution
caused by
transportation
a year and
this
makes worse our environment. Mainly,
this
part of
pollution
is from business
transportation
and private vehicles.
However
, the number of private cars has increased in the
last
decade and even more and more families have the desire to
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second car these years. Without a doubt,
this
situation will become more terrible if
people
can not realise how they are affecting the earth negatively and stop purchasing more cars.
However
, the
government
should
also
take
responsibility
. Many companies can not do business
transportation
without the
government
's permission and sometimes the
government
will ignore their harmful
pollution
for more economic improvement.
Moreover
, the
government
should
also
make more effort to build better public
transportation
to decrease the general public's demand for private cars, as it is true that some
people
have no choice but to drive to work as there is no bus or train in their suburb. In my view,
people
should have the awareness that some of their behaviours are harmful to the environment but the
government
need to take more
responsibility
to manage some business
transportation
and provide more convenient public
transportation
to
people
. In conclusion, it is the duty of both individuals and the
government
to protect our own environment and decrease carbon
pollution
but the
government
should take more
responsibility
to ensure that
this
situation is under control and let the earth become better.
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