Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, there are more
people
and schools who use
computers
in
education
.
While
some
people
argue that using
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computer
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for
education
could lead to many negative
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. In my opinion, using advanced technology in
education
can contribute to
improve
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student’s
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study experience.
Computers
are convenient in
education
for both teachers and
students
.
For instance
, during the Covid-19 pandemic, many
school
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the globe have adapted to online teaching which allowed
students
to use their own electronic devices to attend
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lesson and complete their academic year.
Moreover
, more than 90% of
people
have their own
computer
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these days, which means it is common for
students
to have their own
computer
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.
Therefore
, most
students
are familiar with digital technology and have access to it, making
this
model of studying highly convenient.
Furthermore
, studying online can be more environmentally friendly
due to
the fact that schools do not need to print, so it can reduce paper usage and deforestation. Cause of that there
are
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many positive points in schooling because of
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.
On the other hand
, there are several disadvantages
of
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using
computers
.
Students
especially children who are younger, they
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, so they might
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to it. It is difficult for children to concentrate on the lesson, as the
computers
might distract them from their focus.
Moreover
, long screen time might bring several health issues
such
as eyesight problems and obesity.
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conclusion, the drawbacks of using
computers
in teaching can be decreased through proper guidance and monitoring, and
this
technology can bring greater benefits to young
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work especially for
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. A suggestion would be that schools use
computers
to improve
student’s
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learning but have
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screen time.
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