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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, there are more
people
 and schools who use
computers
 in
education
.
While
 some
people
 argue that using
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computer
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 for
education
 could lead to many negative
side
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. In my opinion, using advanced technology in
education
 can contribute to
improve
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student’s
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students’
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 study experience.
Computers
 are convenient in
education
 for both teachers and
students
.
For instance
, during the Covid-19 pandemic, many
school
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over
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 the globe have adapted to online teaching which allowed
students
 to use their own electronic devices to attend
the
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lesson and complete their academic year.
Moreover
, more than 90% of
people
 have their own
computer
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 these days, which means it is common for
students
 to have their own
computer
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.
Therefore
, most
students
 are familiar with digital technology and have access to it, making
this
 model of studying highly convenient.
Furthermore
, studying online can be more environmentally friendly
due to
 the fact that schools do not need to print, so it can reduce paper usage and deforestation. Cause of that there
are
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 many positive points in schooling because of
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.
On the other hand
, there are several disadvantages
of
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 using
computers
.
Students
 especially children who are younger, they
narrow minded
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, so they might
addicted
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 to it. It is difficult for children to concentrate on the lesson, as the
computers
 might distract them from their focus.
Moreover
, long screen time might bring several health issues
such
 as eyesight problems and obesity.
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 conclusion, the drawbacks of using
computers
 in teaching can be decreased through proper guidance and monitoring, and
this
 technology can bring greater benefits to young
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 work especially for
leaning
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learning
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. A suggestion would be that schools use
computers
 to improve
student’s
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students’
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 learning but have
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 screen time.
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