Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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for study and teaching we can't deny the benefits that
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. it is a compact device and can help us handle a lot of work including studying. For students, when using it in class, it can help learners take notes quickly and conveniently because of its compactness
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have to carry every day. And when studying on a
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provides
such
as slideshows to make the presentation more vivid.
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for learners. For teachers, computers are a great tool for teaching because of their compact size, so teachers only need to carry a
computer
to be able to teach. Using
this
computer
also
helps teachers avoid forgetting lessons or materials at home.
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, it
also
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