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In many countries people increasingly talk about money (how much they earn or how much they pay for things in their daily conversations). Why? Is this a positive or negative development?

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In today's world, everything seems to orbit around
money
. A skyrocketing number of
people
 hold a conversation on a daily basis about
wage
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wages
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 earned or an expensive purchase to impress others.
This
 essay will explore the reasons
of
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 monetary discussion,
as well as
 the potential drawbacks of
this
 practice. The reasons
of
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an
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 increased talk about
money
 are plentiful. First of all, in the past
generations
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money
 had never been an influent topic, it was considered something to discuss between
family's
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member
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members
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 or managed only by the patriarch, causing misconception and ineptitude in others. New generations,
therefore
, are trying to learn from past mistakes and acknowledge
informations
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discussing
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about
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finance daily.
Furthermore
, more men and women are giving economic
advices
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advice
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 on social media, so that more followers,
thus
 income, could have been earned. Another reason, why
human-beings
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 talk about
money
 is to brag, showing off a
luxury
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 lifestyle to impress others and, perhaps,
being
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 accepted in the community.
Although
this
 practice might have some
benefit
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benefits
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,
such
 as
acknowledgment
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 of crucial information for
mankind
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mankind's
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 economical
wellbeing
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well-being
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, the downsides are far more important. Having a daily discussion about monetary numbers
,
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 means that
people
 will begin to value
money
 more than other fundamental aspects of our lives. The world will shift
the
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 attention to a materialistic
matter
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matters
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, rather than human-being rights, environmental issues and so on.
People
 might become obsessed
about
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money
, doing everything in their power to create more income and disparity between
poor
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 and middle class.
Nevertheless
, some mankind could own debt for the mere reason of being part of
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a group
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 of peers with an expensive lifestyle that they cannot afford.
To conclude
, some
people
 talk about
money
 to learn or teach about it, or to show off their life conditions. Despite the few positive effects of economic discussion, the drawbacks are greatly worse,
such
 as obsession
for
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money
 or higher debt.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • materialism
  • economic disparity
  • transparency
  • financial planning
  • financial stress
  • culture of comparison
  • societal taboos
  • financial literacy
  • savings
  • investments
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