Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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seen that the increasing number of environmental issues poses a great threat to our generations.

Although

some people believe that losing certain

species

of

animals

and

plants

is the most serious

problems

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we are faced with, I am of an opinion that we

initially

have to solve other severe

problems

firstly

. On the one hand, many people agree that the loss of various

species

of wildlife

animals

would lead to

a detrimental effects

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detrimental effects

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on our environment for many noteworthy reasons. The most remarkable one is that it is likely to threaten our whole ecosystem because the population of

plants

and

animals

is related to complex contexts. To use a common example of

this

, when a specific animal or plant is endangered or even extinct, it easily results in successive destruction of the food chain, and our ecosystem might be filled with a kind of chaos. A

further

point is that the number of domestic

animals

and edible

plants

also

reduces at

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a lower

lower

point, and it ultimately brings about the scarcity of food resources.

Consequently

, it is

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currently the most significant

issues

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for us to lose the

species

of

plants

and

animals

.

On the other hand

, other people disagree with

this

statement for many reasons. The most important reason for

this

is that we are now struggling with more critical environmental

problems

, which

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the quality of our living environment.

For instance

, nowadays, we consume large amounts of fossil

fuels

to use many transportations like a car and run factories, and

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fossil

fuels

contribute to releasing exhaustion fumes and greenhouse gases.

Furthermore

, it is

also

difficult for us to dispose of a huge amount of waste, especially biodegradable things including plastic containers and plastic bags, which

also

emits

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toxic chemicals when it is burnt out or buried in landfills. These

fuels

gases and chemicals from fossil

fuels

and rubbishes worsen global warming which is more and more damaging on even our life

as well as

the environment.

Therefore

, we are facing

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much more serious

problems

than losing the number of

animals

and

plants

. In conclusion, when all the specific reasons and relevant examples are considered and evaluated, I firmly believe that we should focus on other environmental issues now rather than the loss of

species

in our ecosystem because there are more severe

problems

we must solve.