You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, say what the problem is describe the accommodation you thought you were getting ask the provider to solve the problem

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Respected Sir, My name is Rubina and I am taking an eight-week intensive English course. I am writing

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letter to complain about the challenges I am facing with the accommodation provided at the Phoenix hostel.

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, the apartment is too far from the University and I usually find myself getting late to my lecture venues.

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, the hostel is extremely noisy. No one observes light out or turns down music despite being asked to. When I organised my accommodation, I was assured I would be staying only with post-graduate or intensive-course students.

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, most of the hostelites are doing summer-school courses

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academic failure, and they are all under 22. It seems to me they are enjoying one long party. I would be glad if I am relocated to another hall

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closer to school and is more conducive to serious study, or I may use the remainder of my accommodation fee to go towards a payment for a hotel. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Rubina Gill

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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174 words

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