The chart and the table below give information about healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries. Summarize the iformation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart and the table provide information with regard to health protection resources and the expectation of
life
in some counties.
Overall
, it can be seen that Japan
makes up the highest proportion of hospital beds
, at 14 per thousand
of the population. It also
represents the greatest average life
expectancy which is 83 years. There are many countries with a similar number of hospital beds
, and the gap between these and Japan
is very high.
A more detailed look at the data provides, that despite the American Government's spending the highest amount on health per person ($6,719), the average life
expectancy is the lowest, but nearly the same as the other countries. Germany represents the second-highest country in terms of hospital beds
, at 8 per thousand
Germans, almost half respect in Japan
. The third is the Netherlands accounting for just above 4 beds
per thousand
citizens.
All the other countries do not exceed 4 hospital beds
per thousand
of the population.
Clearly, Japan
and Netherlands Governments, spend a small quantity of money on health per person respect USA, but the expectation of life
is however
higher.Submitted by robertasottile.rbst on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words life, japan, beds, thousand with synonyms.
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