In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

These days,
although
food production operations are more developed than ever, commonly is noticed that more people are suffering from hunger. In
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subject. The main factor which
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disproportionate distribution of food is the necessity to cover the operational costs. What I mean
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it is that to produce something costs not only time
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but
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of it, the amount
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being produced is
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who is buying, not
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those who
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. Take Brazil
for instance
, which
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delivers
meat
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world, but only to
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. A good idea to put in action would be to create an incentive or obligation
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food to
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to poor countries a fraction of these products for free. Another problem to take
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consideration is that all
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developments in agriculture
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never shared with other countries, making it impossible to recover their economy.
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concurrence, the biggest nations work hard
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not to give chances to
these small countries growth
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with their own developments. China
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example, buys not only studies or new technologies, but
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meal
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a lower price to sell to others
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price, which is a practice to
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not cannibalize their own marketing.
Otherwise
, the Union Nations could organize a universal
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to study good practices in agriculture in order to help these nations to feed those who are hungry. In conclusion, I tend to believe that the human race has to consider these
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possibilities to solve the lack of meat for those who
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needs
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.
Accordingly
, it would be generally advisable for all governments to invest in
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this
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people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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