In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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food production operations are more developed than ever, commonly is noticed that more people are suffering from hunger. In

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disproportionate distribution of food is the necessity to cover the operational costs. What I mean

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it is that to produce something costs not only time

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money,

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of it, the amount

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being produced is

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who is buying, not

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those who

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, which

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delivers

meat

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world, but only to

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. A good idea to put in action would be to create an incentive or obligation

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food to

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to poor countries a fraction of these products for free. Another problem to take

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consideration is that all

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developments in agriculture

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never shared with other countries, making it impossible to recover their economy.

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, because

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concurrence, the biggest nations work hard

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not to give chances to

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with their own developments. China

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for

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example, buys not only studies or new technologies, but

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meal

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a lower price to sell to others

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higher

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price, which is a practice to

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not cannibalize their own marketing.

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, the Union Nations could organize a universal

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to study good practices in agriculture in order to help these nations to feed those who are hungry. In conclusion, I tend to believe that the human race has to consider these

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possibilities to solve the lack of meat for those who

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.

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, it would be generally advisable for all governments to invest in

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people.