In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind food. To what extent do u agree or disagree with this opinion?

Health problems are always been a big issue for not only the government but

also

for the citizens of the countries. In

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year

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this

trouble of health is increased and

increasing

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vigorously and fast

food

is a key component of

this

problem. Many

people

, agree with it and suggest it should be in control

immediatly

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immediately

. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss why it is

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and how it can be in control. And

furthermore

,

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the

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last

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I will provide a conclusion with my opinion. To start with why, for the

last

two decades

people

's life is changing at the speed of light they are focusing on their career, money and other unimportant things with

this

, they are neglecting their main reason why? Because of

this

everyone is

attracting

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towards fast and quick services and getting

food

is no exception. Since fast

food

is early

avilable

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available

to eat and that

to

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with, delicious flavours

people

are becoming uncontrollable. And since it includes many

cheminals

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chemicals

that is

not only

unediable

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uneditable

but

also

dangerous for the human body and it causing

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problem on crowds health. Because of

this

,apart from

people

, governments from different countries are

also

getting a headache. To deal with

this

big problem, I believe everyone should make effort

according

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their condition and to stop

this

higher authorities can take myriad actions.

Such

as, they can give strict

instruction

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instructions

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to fast

food

chain companies about the ingredient they use should be approved by the

food

safety department.

In addition

, they can make laws for it and

also

make citizens aware of the side effects of eating fast

food

by

brodcasting

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broadcasting

ads on Tv or big banners.

Also

, the government can make

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a complusion

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complusion

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conclusion

of giving high taxes on

these

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this food

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food

so that

people

can avoid eating junk. In conclusion, I totally agree that suffering from eating junk

food

has increased recently in some nations and imposing extra taxes on

this

food

is a need of

this

decade in order to control

people

eating unhealthy

food

.