In some countries, children often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving the children this message?
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that has been taught by many parents to their kids is that the kids are able to accomplish everything when they work hard for it.
The benefit is that they will have a strong mentality. Fix the agreement mistake
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is because the children
will have a great will and effort to get what they want. For example
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The harm for children
is that the children
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For instance
, when they want to win a competition, then
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will assume that the others must do the same attitude of working all alone too. The other harm is children
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Consequently
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Thus
, I personally believe that parents should not put much pressure on their life in order to prevent those outcomes.Submitted by maryzashabira on
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