A friend had invited you for a meal at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Thank him/her for inviting you 2. Describe how you felt about his/her family members 3. Make suggestions about his/her visit to your place

Dear Toprak, I am writing to thank you for your dinner invitation

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was

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a lovely gathering. In the beginning, I was nervous because I

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met your family before that day.

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, they were all kind and cheerful people. Especially, your nephew Ada is really cool

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follow each other on Instagram

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I believe we'll become close friends. Plus, I requested your aunt to give me the garlic pasta recipe, and she promised

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she

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teach me how to cook fresh pasta .

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, the food was amazing

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there was a positive vibe at that table. I'm really glad I was a part of that evening. The other reason for

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letter is to invite you to my house. I would like to introduce you to some friends. We have an annual meeting

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year I'll be the host. You'll be welcome here. Best wishes, Elif Beyza

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Feb 1, 2023

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Add more detail about how you feel and what you plan to do when your friend visits your home. Be clear on when and where.

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Split ideas into new paragraphs. Put a new idea in a new paragraph.

grammar

Fix small grammar and sign. Make some verbs clear and simple.

tone

Warm tone and kind view of family.

content

Shows care and joy to be at the meet.

structure

Polite close with good wishes.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

152 words

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