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Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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People
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 have different views about whether
noise
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 should be limited.
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 some
individuals
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 believe the level of
noise
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 being created should be strictly controlled, I would argue that
individuals
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 should have the right to produce
noise
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 if they want to. On the one hand, there are several reasons why the government should control the amount of
noise
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 produced. The first reason is that too much
noise
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 can significantly affect
people
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's health. Living in a place
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 too noisy can cause problems
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 as headaches, which can decrease the health levels of
individuals
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, especially old ones.
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,
noise
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 can disturb
people
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's work or studies.
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, a university student will not be able to concentrate on his preparation for exams if his or her neighbours keep singing too loud.
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, I believe
people
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 should be allowed to make as much
noise
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 as they want because of some reasons.
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, producing
noise
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 is sometimes considered a type of recreational activity.
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, singing or cheering for a football club can be relaxing, and everyone has the right to do those things.
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, as the world is becoming more modern,
people
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 have found ways to deal with the problem of
noise
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. Scientists have invented walls and windows that can block out
noise
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, which allows
individuals
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 to focus on their work without being disturbed.
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, the problem of
noise
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 can be reduced and there is no need for
people
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 to keep quiet. In conclusion,
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 many
people
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 believe there should be controls on
noise
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, I believe we have the right to create
noise
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 when we want to.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • noise pollution
  • quality of life
  • noise levels
  • stress
  • disturb sleep
  • imposing legal restrictions
  • peaceful living environment
  • tolerance levels
  • personal freedom
  • business operations
  • designated quiet zones
  • commercial and industrial zones
  • urban areas
  • public awareness campaigns
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