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The table below shows the amount spent on healthcare in different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the amount spent on healthcare in different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table shows the average healthcare spending per
peson
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person
 in three
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 of countries which are East Asia, the Middle East, and
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American
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America
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on
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 2010. Generally, we can see that people in East Asia
country
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countries
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 spent the most money compared to
Middle
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the Middle
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 East and
latin
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Latin
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American
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America
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. Japanese,
as
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the first place, spent more than 2,500 dollars
for
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on
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 well-being facilities
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 the second place, South Koreans, only spent
a
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half of it and followed by Singaporeans.
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, healthcare spending in the middle east country is only around 800 dollars, as big as the average global spending. Argentina, Chile, and Brazil as
latin
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Latin
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 American
Country
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countries
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 placed
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 with average spending
approximately
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of approximately
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 450 dollars.

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