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Today’s generation have stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your opinion.

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Stress had never been a part of our lives.Contemporary
people
 believe that they have more stress than the previous one. In
this
 ,
an
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essay I will argue both sides and explain why I see nowadays culture as a more stressful life in terms of working competition and living costs skyrocketing. Many
people
 claim that lives used to be less challenging in the
last
 few decades since they had fewer demands and responsibilities. For ,example my parents did not struggle with payment for the internet or buying new smartphones. There is Statistics illustrate that
people
 had fewer mental issues collaborated with tension than what the nation facing now
Although
 modern life has a bright side, the environment now is quite challenged
due to
 the high competition between
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for example
 ,nowadays it is difficult to get a job compared to the
last
 generation. One more reason is that living costs surging . For ,instance the prices of buying property doubled in the
last
 20 years . research made at Kyiv university shows that food costs increased dramatically in the
last
 30 years by 138 per cent. In ,conclusion even though
people
 had tension, nowadays stress is even more linked to human development.
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