Many museums charge for admissions while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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It has long been argued, whether museums should impose entry fees or not.

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, it is observed that several are charging,

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others are providing free services. Some

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cite that it accelerates the state's economy, I suppose, buying tickets may decrease the mass interest. Here, the following paragraphs aim to make comparisons between the merits and demerits and conclude with a statement that supports my viewpoint. To start with, one of the disadvantages of free entry

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highlighted by the critiques is that as maintenance of a

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is expensive, totally uncharged admission affects national budgets.

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, every year the managerial committee has to be paid by the Authorities to take care of,

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the charges from mass

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who contribute to preserving historical and cultural objects.

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, in favour of paid entry, supporters argue that it creates a feeling of pride in the pupil's mind.

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, it immerses the value of the

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among societies.

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, heavy charges demotivate parents to bring their children to explore a

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, youngsters and aged

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have hardly been found to buy a ticket.

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, Sikh

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in Punjab is visited by a significant number of the public every day as the entrance is costless.

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, free access to explore develops the stock of knowledge about the civilization. In a nutshell, there are multiple benefits and drawbacks and everything has its own peak. Yet, I have observed that

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likely enjoy visiting without spending. So, to attract

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, cheap access becomes more fruitful than the other.

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