In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case?

In several
populations
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human beings who possess a
house
rather than rent one has a significant impact on society in my opinion I completely believe that each one could have pros and cons but the benefits of owning a
house
are more than they hire a
house
and I will state my view in
this
essay. On the one hand, It benefits a nation to possess a
house
because if
people
have their own
house
do not have to worry about paying to rent each month or more.
whereas
, they must pay fees for the
house
, in spite of
this
they can be more comfortable in their own
house
rather than renting a
house
.
for instance
; they can change or even boiled the
house
according to
their taste
while
a person who rents a
house
could not change the style of the building.
On the other hand
,
,
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currently
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people
who are not able to buy a
house
can rent a
house
and continue their lives without being worried about
this
that
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or that
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, and can not find a shelter
however
people
have different earnings and expenses.
furthermore
, it is not mean that poor
people
just are not able to buy a
house
.
for example
; there are
people
who are rich and have a lot of money but, they would not like
buying
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a
house
and would like to make more money on investigating
instead
of buying a
house
. In conclusion, possessing a
house
is better than renting a
house
and has many benefits for
people
and they absolutely society are more comfortable in their own
house
than in
people
’s houses.
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