In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case?
In several
populations
human beings who possess a Add a comma
,populations
house
rather than rent one has a significant impact on society in my opinion I completely believe that each one could have pros and cons but the benefits of owning a house
are more than they hire a house
and I will state my view in this
essay.
On the one hand, It benefits a nation to possess a house
because if people
have their own house
do not have to worry about paying to rent each month or more. whereas
, they must pay fees for the house
, in spite of this
they can be more comfortable in their own house
rather than renting a house
. for instance
; they can change or even boiled the house
according to
their taste while
a person who rents a house
could not change the style of the building.
On the other hand
, ,
Change the punctuation
apply
currently
Add a comma
,currently
people
who are not able to buy a house
can rent a house
and continue their lives without being worried about this
that
, and can not find a shelter Correct word choice
or that
however
people
have different earnings and expenses. furthermore
, it is not mean that poor people
just are not able to buy a house
. for example
; there are people
who are rich and have a lot of money but, they would not like buying
a Change the verb form
to buy
house
and would like to make more money on investigating instead
of buying a house
.
In conclusion, possessing a house
is better than renting a house
and has many benefits for people
and they absolutely society are more comfortable in their own house
than in people
’s houses.Submitted by faragianhawore on
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