the plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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the diagram illustrates land that has been built as an airport ,but it will redesign to improve
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capacity and infrastructure.
overall
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, a train will be added
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new two buildings that
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18 gates, which
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connect
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to
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.
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new
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and shops have been added which provide several services. in the matter of now, the airport is
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small
with only one cafe in
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departures
holl.
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any shops where the passengers do not have any services in.
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, the
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the gates is
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and there is no transformation
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version of the airport.
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, new buildings have more gates than the previous had .
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old cafe will remain the same.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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