Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is this a positive or negative development?

People
have different views about advertisements and their effects. Nowadays they are ubiquitous so that
people
can come across them everywhere and I believe that
this
development is very negative because of two reasons.
Firstly
, they tend to make
people
buy the latest things
such
as clothes, even though they do not want them to them affordable.
Ads
are often manipulative because they are usually made interesting by adding special effects , so they can easily affect
people
's choices.
This
, in turn, results in a huge waste of money for consumers as they immediately try to achieve instant gratification by getting the products advertised, but are likely to regret it very soon
due to
poor quality.
For example
, I recently bought shoes online, about which I had got information from
ads
placed on TV and
then
it turned out to be a bad decision since the shoes were not as good as they were expected to be.
Secondly
, advertisers often aim their marketing at
children
. The main reason is that most
children
can be easily influenced by
ads
,
although
they are nothing but flashy.
Children
,
for instance
, may watch an ad about an interesting, yet expensive,
toy
and immediately pester their parents to buy the
toy
. Of course,
this
causes some financial problems for parents, who have much pressure without toys too, like providing food for their
children
. Worse, the
children
are likely to use the
toy
for a short time because they will probably watch television again and see another
toy
advert. If it happens many times, it often causes some health problems for parents,
such
as stress and anxiety. In conclusion, the increasing popularity of
ads
is harming both adults and
children
.
Therefore
, I feel that
this
has been a very negative development since it started.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • promote
  • economic growth
  • provide information
  • awareness
  • job opportunities
  • manipulative
  • misleading
  • consumerism
  • materialism
  • invade
  • personal space
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