Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is this a positive or negative development?

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People
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have different views about advertisements and their effects. Nowadays they are ubiquitous so that
people
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can come across them everywhere and I believe that
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development is very negative because of two reasons.
Firstly
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, they tend to make
people
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buy the latest things
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as clothes, even though they do not want them to them affordable.
Ads
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are often manipulative because they are usually made interesting by adding special effects , so they can easily affect
people
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's choices.
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, in turn, results in a huge waste of money for consumers as they immediately try to achieve instant gratification by getting the products advertised, but are likely to regret it very soon
due to
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poor quality.
For example
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, I recently bought shoes online, about which I had got information from
ads
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placed on TV and
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it turned out to be a bad decision since the shoes were not as good as they were expected to be.
Secondly
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, advertisers often aim their marketing at
children
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. The main reason is that most
children
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can be easily influenced by
ads
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,
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they are nothing but flashy.
Children
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,
for instance
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, may watch an ad about an interesting, yet expensive,
toy
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and immediately pester their parents to buy the
toy
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. Of course,
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causes some financial problems for parents, who have much pressure without toys too, like providing food for their
children
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. Worse, the
children
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are likely to use the
toy
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for a short time because they will probably watch television again and see another
toy
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advert. If it happens many times, it often causes some health problems for parents,
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as stress and anxiety. In conclusion, the increasing popularity of
ads
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is harming both adults and
children
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.
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, I feel that
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has been a very negative development since it started.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • promote
  • economic growth
  • provide information
  • awareness
  • job opportunities
  • manipulative
  • misleading
  • consumerism
  • materialism
  • invade
  • personal space
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