Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
The map shows the growth of a
village
called
Chorleywood
between 1868 and 1994.
It is clear that
the
village
grew as the transport infrastructure was improved. Four periods of development are shown on the map, and each of the populated areas is near
to
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the main roads, the
railway
or the motorway. From 1868 to 1883,
Chorleywood
covered a small area next to one of the main roads.
Chorleywood
Park and Golf Course
is
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now located next to
this
original
village
area. The
village
grew along the main road to the south between 1883 and 1922, and in 1909 a
railway
line was built crossing
this
area from west to east.
Chorleywood
station is in
this
part of the
village
. The expansion of
Chorleywood
continued to the east and west alongside the
railway
line until 1970. At that time, a motorway was built to the east of the
village
, and from 1970 to 1994,
further
development of the
village
took place around motorway intersections with the
railway
and one of the main roads.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words village, chorleywood, railway with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • population
  • increased steadily
  • middle of the nineteenth century
  • development
  • location
  • factors
  • contributing
  • physical
  • infrastructural
  • effects
  • conclusion
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