The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sport is seen as the major method of leading

children

to collaborate. In

this

essay, I will support

this

idea,

however

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but

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,

also

finding

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find

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other solutions.

To begin

with,

cooperation

means working together respecting each other and listening to the ideas of all

team

members to reach a common result and it is true that sports represent a good approach in instructing

this

to

children

, in fact, if the

team

wants to bring home

a

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apply

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win

cooperation

is the fundamental key in

this

“battle”.

For instance

, it is impossible that a

team

can win a match if every player

think

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just to themselves ,

don’t

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doesn’t

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want to

listen

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tolisten

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other opinions and feel a strong sense of competition with each

team

member. 

However

, other methods of getting

children

to cooperate have been emphasized,

such

as group work at school or group readings. Even if, I agree with the importance of sports to educate

children

to cooperate, should be considered that not all kids love playing sports or can do it for physical problems.

Therefore

, it is important to keep in mind other forms of

cooperation

. In group work, for ,instance, on an assignment,

children

need as well to work together to get that perfectly done. 

To conclude

, I agree with the statement but not in full percentage, in fact, in my opinion, it is always better to keep an open mind to various methods of teaching, whether it is teaching

cooperation

or another skill because we are not all alike, which is great because if we were all the same, we would have been robots.