You are getting married later this year. You want to invite your friend to the wedding. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter - tell your friend that you are getting married - tell them when and where the wedding will take place -- ask them to help you prepare for the wedding in some way

Dear Amrit, How are you? I hope you've been well. You will be over the moon after reading

this

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letter because the wait has

finally

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come to an end

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, as

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Gurfateh and I have

finally

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decided to get married. The wedding date has been decided by our families after considering everyone's work schedule. As you already know, I wanted a destination wedding my whole life; it is

finally

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happening in Jaipur, which is

also

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called the Pink City of India. Even though the wedding is taking place on December 18, 2025, the pre-rituals will start from December 10, 2025, onwards. I will not listen to any excuse

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I want you to be there by the start of December because you will be my bride's maid, and you have to assist me with all the preparations

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, like

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selecting jewellery and dresses, etc.

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, do not forget to inform your parents. I will be sending them an invitation as well. I can't wait to see you! Your loving friend, Simran

bhullarsimran2121

Jul 16, 2025

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Make sure to check your dates and details for clarity.

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You could add more personal feelings about the wedding to make it warmer.

coherence and cohesion

Each paragraph should focus on one main point, which you did well.

coherence and cohesion

Try to use a variety of sentence structures for better flow.

coherence and cohesion

The letter has a clear greeting and closing.

task achievement

You did a great job inviting your friend and showing excitement.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

168 words

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The Closing

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