The chart below show the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
Given is a bar graph which indicates the products being bought in two nations in 2010.
Overall
, it is obvious that cars were the most popular consumer goods in France and UK.
Looking closely at the data in the UK , cars,books and cameras had declined by 50000 each starting from approximately 450000 . Cameras held 360000 pounds , similar to computers which had a figure of 350000 , just a bit over the camera . Linking Words
On the contrary
, perfume was least popular in the UK , consuming merely 150000 pounds sterling .
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Furthermore
, screening the amount numbers in France , cars and computers came close, 400000 Linking Words
as well as
380000 respectively. Books were favoured by 300000 pounds sterling , which was 100000 higher than perfume . Perfume and cameras held a 100000 gap from 200000 Linking Words
according to
the chart.Linking Words
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