The graph below shows the pollution levels in London between 1600 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates dirtying of
air
thanks to Correct article usage
the air
smoke
and sulphur dioxide
in the capital of US
, in Correct article usage
the US
years
around 1600 and 2000. Unit of Correct article usage
the years
air
given us as meter cube.
Overall
, we can noticed
that the most dangerous thing to our planet is sulphur Change the verb form
notice
dioxide
. Graph shows, since 1600 the main enemy of the
London city was sulphur Correct article usage
apply
dioxide
and second
pollutant was Correct article usage
the second
smoke
.
At the begging of the
1600 Correct article usage
apply
year
, sulfur Fix the agreement mistake
years
dioxide
wasn't problem
of the pollution as in 1850 years. Its cause was Add an article
a problem
the problem
Correct article usage
the unusing
unusing
of factories and motor cars. After, people started to use many types of technology, Correct your spelling
unused
what
worked thanks to motors and highlighted toxins that I called before, and started to open too Correct pronoun usage
which
much
factories closer to 18 century. So thanks Change the quantifier
many
for
that Change preposition
to
air
started to be dirtier. The pick of the pollution level was in 1850. In
that time Change preposition
At
microgram
of called Fix the agreement mistake
micrograms
atom
took around Fix the agreement mistake
atoms
900 meter
Add a hyphen
900-meter
cube
. Between 1950 and 2000 years, Fix the infinitive
to cube
line
graph wasn’t stable and got Correct article usage
the line
drop
in the Add an article
a drop
the drop
last
year.
Smoke
also
was a reason of
Change preposition
for
a
dirty Correct article usage
the
air
. It began to appear since
1600. And slowly increased till 1900. And started to drop from that year. It was unstable too from 1950 till 2000.
In conclusion, both of them (Sulfur Change preposition
in
dioxide
, smoke
) didn’t give Correct word choice
and smoke
dangerous
in 1600 and 2000. But, Replace the word
danger
closely
to Change the word
close
19th
century, they achieved their pick of pollution.Correct article usage
the 19th
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, smoke, dioxide with synonyms.
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