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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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In the contemporary era, more and more people are prone to diseases
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the lack of sufficient nutritious foods and so on.
Therefore
, they are more inclined to appeal to other medical substances and practical ways of therapy
instead
 of going to their doctors. I strongly agree with the idea and I believe it should be increased in
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 way
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 patients can have a chance to choose more feasible methods to cure themselves.
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technology, our life is becoming much easier day by day in terms of that, we might just consult
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Google, and devour many reliable articles about living a healthier life. Normally, now many doctors try to share important
as well as
 approved information regarding what kind of medicines can be consumed
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 their followers via their social media accounts.
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 recent study shows that the number of pretend doctors
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 much more power to threaten people's
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 as they attempt to sell their own fake products to their patients with the aim of making a huge amount of money and convincing society
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 process is so easy that they do not need to find alternative treatments. Another noticeable point that needs to take into account is that, if people continue to visit their physicians and do not see any improvement in their health and immunity, it is
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 negative approach that may cause other potential psychological issues. One clear explanation is that humans lose a great deal of time and money for them as we force ourselves to go to primary care
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 and expect big results.
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 affordable and
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practical method since we can easily choose many internationally certified practitioners on the Internet. In conclusion, I concur with the supporters of the view that the community has many opportunities
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 if they start to appeal to other accurate ways which can
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profound impact on their health problems positively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • alternative medicines
  • treatments
  • positive development
  • negative development
  • health problems
  • usual doctor
  • access
  • personalized approach
  • holistic well-being
  • lack of regulation
  • evidence-based research
  • proper medical treatment
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