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The table below shows the number of cars made in three countries in 2003, 2006 and 2009.

The table below shows the number of cars made in three countries in 2003, 2006 and 2009.
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This
 table compares three nations, namely
Argentina
,
Australia
 and
Thailand
 in terms of the production of
cars
 between 2003 and 2009.
It is clear that
Argentina
 produced fewer
car
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cars
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 than previously, but the opposite was true for other countries.
Thailand
, despite
witnessed
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 a gradual fall in the
last
 two years, was always the largest
car
 producer over the period shown. In 2003, 700
thousand
cars
 were produced in
Thailand
,
while
Argentina
 manufactured 400
thousand
cars
, which
double
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 that of
Australia
, with 200
thousand
cars
. In the next 2 years,
Thailands'
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Thailand's
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car
 manufacturing rocketed and ranked top at 1,119
thousands
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thousand
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, compared with a marginal climb to 200
thousand
cars
 in
Australia
.
In contrast
, there was a
dramatical
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 decline to 200
thousand
cars
 in the number of
car
 production in
Argentina
. Over the
4 - year
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4-year
 period,
car
 manufacture in
Australia
continue
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 to show a rise of 200
thousand
.
Thailand
;
however
, witnessed a slight decrease to 999
thousand
, which was repeated in
Argentina
 whose
car
 production
also
 dropped minimally to 161
thousand
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words argentina, australia, thailand, cars, car, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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