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The table below shows the number of cars made in three countries in 2003, 2006 and 2009.

The table below shows the number of cars made in three countries in 2003, 2006 and 2009.
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This
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 table compares three nations, namely
Argentina
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,
Australia
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 and
Thailand
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 in terms of the production of
cars
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 between 2003 and 2009.
It is clear that
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Argentina
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 produced fewer
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car
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cars
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 than previously, but the opposite was true for other countries.
Thailand
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, despite
witnessed
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 a gradual fall in the
last
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 two years, was always the largest
car
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 producer over the period shown. In 2003, 700
thousand
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cars
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 were produced in
Thailand
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,
while
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Argentina
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 manufactured 400
thousand
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cars
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, which
double
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 that of
Australia
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, with 200
thousand
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cars
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. In the next 2 years,
Thailands'
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car
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 manufacturing rocketed and ranked top at 1,119
thousands
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thousand
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, compared with a marginal climb to 200
thousand
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cars
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 in
Australia
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.
In contrast
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, there was a
dramatical
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 decline to 200
thousand
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cars
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 in the number of
car
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 production in
Argentina
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. Over the
4 - year
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4-year
 period,
car
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 manufacture in
Australia
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continue
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 to show a rise of 200
thousand
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.
Thailand
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;
however
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, witnessed a slight decrease to 999
thousand
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, which was repeated in
Argentina
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 whose
car
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 production
also
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 dropped minimally to 161
thousand
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words argentina, australia, thailand, cars, car, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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