Education is not a luxury but a basic human righ and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that
education
should be totally free of charge regardless of
people
's wealth. I agree with the statement that all citizens must receive equal
education
without charge.
To begin
with,
due to
the overpopulation around the world, some
schools
require a tuition fee for students.
In other words
, the human population has increased and reached 8 billion which
consequently
destroyed
balance
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in
education
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system.
For example
, some educational institutions cannot afford their needs
such
as the salary of teachers, gas and electricity and only governmental funds are not enough to maintain
the
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education
.
Moreover
, private
schools
have gained popularity which
have
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extra facilities for students and good curriculums.
Therefore
, some of them ask for high charges for the service and their needs and only
people
who are financially
freedom
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send their children to private
schools
.
However
,
education
should not be separated between the rich and the poor not only it helps to raise a wise generation for nations but
also
it is a basic human right to have an equal educational opportunity. If going to school becomes
luxury
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, it is likely to have ignored and less wised
people
in the future. To tackle
this
problem, all citizens and especially wealthy
people
should be extra taxed to fund all
schools
along with
the aid of governments.
For example
, most nations' budget goes for military purposes.
However
,
instead
of that,
education
should be prioritized.
To conclude
, because of the increase in population, some
schools
cannot afford their needs.
Therefore
, they ask for a charge.
However
,
education
is a basic human right and should be free for citizens irrespective of personal wealth.
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