You live in a room in college which you share with another student. There are many problems with this arrangement and you find it difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: describe the situation explain the problems and why is it difficult to work say how you would like the situation resolved

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Dear Sir I’m writing to complain about the problem with my roommate
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I share my room
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plate 322 on the second floor. Owing to my upcoming exam requires me to pay attention profoundly and work hard with the specified crucial project which is given and planned to hold on 24 th of march at
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lesson by my tutor. My roommate from Holland not only has a noise substantially
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but
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her friends to hang out in the evenings every day. And it makes me angry,
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inconvenience and uncomfortable
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the duration of preparing exam. As I mentioned above, there is significant trouble bringing about my productivity decreasing considerably.
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of the fact that I warned her several times, she ignored me. Meanwhile, I want you to take the control of
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condition and resolve it.
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I deserve a sincere apology and
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from her for taking my time,
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makes me inflame.
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faithfully Kate
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation officer
  • roommate
  • share a room
  • living arrangement
  • difficult to work
  • noise levels
  • study environment
  • privacy concerns
  • alternative accommodation
  • single room
  • academic performance
  • well-being
  • respectfully request
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