The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided by chart illustrates the proportion of people in terms of their habits in
coffee
/ tea usage in five cities in Australia (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide) during the
last
four weeks.
Overall
many people were interested in having
coffee
from a cafe,
while
the least percentage of folks were into buying fresh
coffee
. In terms of customers who bought fresh
coffee
, was less than 45% in every city.
However
, Sydney accounted for approximately 43% of buying fresh
coffee
, which was the highest percentage than that of other cities. Citizens from Brisbane and Adelaide accounted for just under 35% of
this
category,
while
Melbourne and Hobart reached approximately 42% and 37% respectively.
On the other hand
, instant
coffee
buyers varied between 45% to 55% in 5 cities,
while
Horbart had 54% of an approximate result as the highest.
Moreover
, Sydney citizens accounted for the lowest of just above 45%.
Furthermore
, the percentage of cafe users in Melbourne reached the maximum of 64%, which was slightly higher than that of Hobart which accounted for 68% closely.
Finally
, Adelaide's people were more interested in buying instant
coffee
than other options.
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