The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided by chart illustrates the proportion of people in terms of their habits in

coffee

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/ tea usage in five cities in Australia (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide) during the

last

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four weeks.

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many people were interested in having

coffee

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from a cafe,

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the least percentage of folks were into buying fresh

coffee

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. In terms of customers who bought fresh

coffee

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, was less than 45% in every city.

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, Sydney accounted for approximately 43% of buying fresh

coffee

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, which was the highest percentage than that of other cities. Citizens from Brisbane and Adelaide accounted for just under 35% of

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category,

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Melbourne and Hobart reached approximately 42% and 37% respectively.

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, instant

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buyers varied between 45% to 55% in 5 cities,

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Horbart had 54% of an approximate result as the highest.

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, Sydney citizens accounted for the lowest of just above 45%.

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, the percentage of cafe users in Melbourne reached the maximum of 64%, which was slightly higher than that of Hobart which accounted for 68% closely.

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, Adelaide's people were more interested in buying instant

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than other options.

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