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Write a letter to the transport officer about a problem with transport system in your area. Explain in letter . -describe the situation you are facing -why you consider it a problem -what changes you like to recommend

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Dear sir, I am writing my letter to bring your attention towards a problem with the transport system in my area. My name is arun prakash and I live in the Brooklawn area. I use public service every day to attend college. Unfortunately, I noticed that the buses in the morning are not following the right time. It is so disappointing to say that the buses are running late more than 15 minutes without prior notice. I find it extremely difficult for me to reach my college at the right time nowadays. I am a student and I rely on public transport for my commuting. Being a non-driver,it is very difficult for me to cope with the delay in public transport.
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 I consider it a serious problem I kindly suggest you issue a schedule for the buses and request you to instruct the drivers to stick on to the time. please look into the above-mentioned issue and do the needful to keep the proper bus schedule for the Brooklawn area. Thank you for reading my letter and I expect a positive outcome. yours sincerely
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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