Some people suggest that setting up more gyms will encourage people to remain active. What problems are associated with this proposal? What solutions can you offer for good health?
Many people hold a view that promoting machines for exercise is good for spreading health benefits among the masses,
however
, it will cost them a huge part of the money. I would, rather, suggest that jogging may help someone in achieving a healthy lifestyle.
On one hand, many pubs make money in the name of health. The more Linking Words
such
places mean the more instructors, and the more instructors mean the more chances of hiring unprofessional guides which will cost a trainee a part of the money and joint aches because of doing wrong exercises under the supervision of these trainers. Linking Words
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such
places recruited seasonal trainers to run their businesses, Linking Words
thus
, many fitness issues have been reported in my locality during the Linking Words
last
four years.
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on the other hand
, if more exercise clubs are built, more awareness of a standard lifestyle will spread. Linking Words
As a result
, the locals will start working out at home, follow diet plans or, even, take join these clubs, Linking Words
thus
, will become more energetic because of the health plan they follow. Take the example of the citizens of America and Pakistan. Americans are energetic, even, in their old ages, Linking Words
whereas
, the later ones are comparatively weaker in their young ages. To explain it Linking Words
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, my Aunt, who is 80 years old, from America went for a walk with my 20 years old Pakistani cousin, and returned back to normal condition, Linking Words
whereas
my cousin was looking extremely tired.
But in my opinion, workout in the morning is a better option to maintain fitness by maintaining body weight. As it keeps your body healthy and active, Linking Words
hence
, it may result in a longer life. In Europe, Linking Words
for example
, a native lives a long life because of the jogging routine he follows.
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To conclude
, supporting the fitness club may keep your society lively, but it may Linking Words
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promote the businesses of some money-making groups for their own motives. Linking Words
However
, walking or similar physical activities may keep you more social and happy.Linking Words
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