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An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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In a quest of finding alternatives to books and other printed materials for tasks and examinations ,especially with a growing number of innovative AR or desktop and mobile applications for the education systems,
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, numerous schools supply
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 like handy computers and tablets. In
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 essay, I shall draw some key points of the pros and cons of allowing
students
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 to use
gadgets
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 in the classroom.   Some would argue that delivering facilities like these surely allow
students
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 to not bring their heavy books which sometimes leads to several health issues.
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, bringing some scientific textbooks like Physics Universe by Halliday and Resnick affected back pain.
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 it is certainly the case that learning with laptops and tablets enables
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 to retain their stamina during study hours which usually take more than 12 hours. 
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, in reality, there are a number of
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 who could not able to focus on the materials given by the teachers because of gadget distraction. Based on my fellow teacher's experience, one of her
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 was not answering the teacher's question when it comes to cold calling in the classroom. The
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 were not able to manage the pace of learning which resulted in lower grades. Seen in
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 light, providing
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 might subside the grades  
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, both the positive and negative side has been presented. In order to alleviate the disadvantages of
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 provided by schools, a policy should be developed,
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 as a ban on the usage of laptops during study hours.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Interactive learning
  • Educational resources
  • Digital materials
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Investment
  • Distraction
  • Equality
  • Technology access
  • Technical issues
  • Prolonged use
  • Eye strain
  • Posture
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