You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write about 150 words

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write about 150 words
This
flow chart illustrates the procedure of making soft cheese in four stages. Wate and milk are two ingredients to be utilized
while
making.
Firstly
, by mixing
wate
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water
and milk together at 5
degree
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for approximately two hours, the stage of cooling can be completed by
then
.
Next,
salt is required to be put into the mixed raw materials, so as to achieve the process of fermentation.
By contrast
, it takes as long as 50 hours to ferment at the degree of 37.
This
followed
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by a steam evaporation course, in which all of the stuff needs to be heated for 8 hours at the evaporated temperature of 100
degree
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. In the end, all the food materials should be filtered before soft cheese
being
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produced. In summary, it can be seen that it takes more than 7 days to complete the whole process of making soft cheese. The crucial point is to control the temperature and time of
this
production.
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