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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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Nowadays
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 more and more choose Complementary
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traditional one.
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 some groups of
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 think these methods are dangerous, I would assert that in most cases they work and pose no major risk to human health. On the one hand, Alternative forms of
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 don’t have scientific proof, so some kinds of treatments cannot suit
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 or the result is not noticed. Many complementary companies try to use the placebo effect, but many believe that it can be helpful and
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 help. But I am sure that it works with minor illnesses, but when
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 have long-term chronic illnesses, it will be better to come to a traditional therapist.
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, when
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 have broken arms or legs, traditional
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 helps faster and more qualitatively, because these doctors have special modern equipment
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 as laser, scan, MRT and others else. In the end personal result can be more correctly
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, using of complementary
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 have their advantages and they don’t harm our health, because they don’t have cause side effects, which usually
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 can see in traditional
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. The main distinctive feature is that now a lot of different experts work in various areas of
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 shamanism, ayurveda, folklore and others. Each of them has an individual approach for every
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, some back diseases are treated through relaxation and manual therapists work with
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 problem In conclusion, now a big choice is which kind of
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 can be used. Alternative
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 helps
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 and may be more effective and less risky than the traditional one
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