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Why are some people who leave school early more successful compared with those who complete their studies. Provide reasons why they are more successful and what are the requirements for success?

#people #school #studies #requirements #success
It is common knowledge that completing
education
 through formal
school
 plays a vital role
behind
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 the success of someone. Yet, recently there are some cases where someone who
complete
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 their studies
have
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 a lower success rate when compared to pupils who leave their
school
 relatively earlier. Recognizing
this
 phenomenon, the author
argue
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 that
school
 is not the only variable behind the
successful
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 of people. The following paragraphs will support several arguments
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author's
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 stand. To have a better understanding of
this
 context, Bill Gates, the founder of one of the greatest technology on earth, could
be took
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 into account as an example. He did not finish his formal
school
, yet he registered himself in the list of richest guys in the world.
Also
, Mark
Zurkeberg
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Zuckerberg
, the founder of Facebook
that
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apply
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had not
able
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been able
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 in gaining a formal degree since leaving
school
 before its timeline. Despite
of
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his failure in formal
education
, he is able to be a human being that
provide
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great
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a great
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 impact
to
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the global society
due to
 his invention. Gates and
Zurkeberg
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Zuckerberg
 are the only two
example
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examples
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 of numerous people that have not a formal degree but
still
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are still
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 able to record
theirself
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their self
 as
the
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top notch
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 persons. Prior studies mentioned that
along with
 formal
education
, ethical
work
 is another important variable to help someone
to
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reach
its
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their
his
her
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 dream. Even though Gates and
Zurkeberg
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Zuckerberg
 were unsuccess in their formal
education
,
yet
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both individuals have good ethical
work
 which
make
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 them more valuable than others. Persistent and highly motivated are sort of examples of ethical
work
.
In addition
 to
persistent
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being persistent
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 and highly motivated, discovering our passion will
also
 assist us to have
such
attitude
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. To summarize, we cannot ignore that
education
 is
such
 an important variable to help people in pursuing
his
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or
her
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their
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 dream. Yet, it is not the come first variable.
Education
 should be complementary
with
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 having excellency in ethical
work
.
Thus
, having both variables in our life would mobile us to reach success easier.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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