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Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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It has been argued that
schools
 are not essential nowadays since children can get all they want through online learning. As for me, I totally disagree with that. It is totally insane to replace the role of
schools
 with the
Internet
 completely.
Schools
 guide students, leading them to learn
knowledge
 step by step. As the education process goes through a set of curricula, the difficulty and depth of
knowledge
 will be added stepwise based on
students'
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student's
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 age and their abilities to absorb new
knowledge
.
Thus
 preventing them from choking on the overwhelming
information
 they can access via the
internet
.
Moreover
, considering the limited focus time one child can hold, it is questionable whether they have the ability to stay focused for a long time when accessing the
Internet
 without being distracted, which is unarguably common when the
information
 is too difficult to learn compared to their age and will lead to the lacking of
knowledge
.
Nevertheless
,
schools
 are not only a place to provide education but
also
 play a vital role in regulation and social ability training. Taking examples of children from 9-12 years old, they are in the stage of forming personalities and senses of the world, the
schools
 regulate their behaviour and provide a relatively simplified environment for them to form their social abilities.
On the contrary
, if they get all the
information
 through the
Internet
 without the intervention of
schools
, they may fall into missing
information
 or be distracted by entertainment programs
such
 as games for children of
this
 age who often lack cognitive and serious attitudes to learning. In conclusion, from my point of view, I believe that grabbing
information
 only from the
Internet
while
 ignoring school education is a risky choice and may cause irreversible results.
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  • immediate feedback
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  • discipline
  • time management skills
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  • equal access
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