You moved to the new house and you would like to invited your friend to come visit your new house write a letter to your friend and tell about it #house #friend #visit

Dear Anna, I am writing to let you know that

finally

, we moved to new a

bigger

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and bigger

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house. As you know I can not go on living in two bedrooms apartment any more, because my kids now are growing up and they need more space to do outdoor activities. We start looking and now here we are! My children are happy because we have

the

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big living room and we have three bedrooms and two balconies.

Furthermore

, we

also

have

modern

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a modern

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kitchen with

spacious

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a spacious

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bathroom. Well, the happiest is John perhaps because the house is near to his office. Would you please come around the weekend to have a look

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at my

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new homes and if the weather is good we can make

barbecue

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a barbecue

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in the garden. Please let us know. Our address and phone number are below and you can call us at any time. We can not wait to see you soon. Lost of loves Jenny

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

157 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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