You moved to the new house and you would like to invited your friend to come visit your new house write a letter to your friend and tell about it #house #friend #visit

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Dear Anna, I am writing to let you know that
finally
Linking Words

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, we moved to new a
bigger
Correct word choice
and bigger

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house. As you know I can not go on living in two bedrooms apartment any more, because my kids now are growing up and they need more space to do outdoor activities. We start looking and now here we are! My children are happy because we have
the
Correct article usage
a

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big living room and we have three bedrooms and two balconies.
Furthermore
Linking Words

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, we
also
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

have
modern
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a modern

The noun phrase modern kitchen seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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kitchen with
spacious
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a spacious

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bathroom. Well, the happiest is John perhaps because the house is near to his office. Would you please come around the weekend to have a look
my
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at my

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new homes and if the weather is good we can make
barbecue
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a barbecue

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in the garden. Please let us know. Our address and phone number are below and you can call us at any time. We can not wait to see you soon. Lost of loves Jenny
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