In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for fewyears, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss and give your opinion.

There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of when new

teachers

here and

doctors

should

work

in

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country sides

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for a

while

.That's because a multitude of schools and hospitals with

a

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good quality are in crowded towns. I will discuss both views in the fourth coming

paragraphs

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altough

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although

I totally disagree with

this

opinion.

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considerably

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number of opponents argue that

teachers

and

doctors

have to

work

in rural areas as well. In

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, there

is

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a lot of gaps between cities and outside of the urban areas and some people give efforts to reduce these. What's more, many residents in small towns have to leave for thousand

miles

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away from their homes just to get cured or to receive

better

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education.

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, my grandma living in a country had to spend much meaningless time, putting down to the location of the medical centre.

Thus

, many people express opinions about forcing

teachers

or

doctors

to

work

in specific spaces.

In contrast

, everyone has a right to choose where to

work

regardless of

careers

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. To be specific, it's not reasonable to form compulsory policies which can be harmful to a significant number of jobs including educators.

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,

this

can lead to reducing the professionals' passion and damaging individuals' lives. If someone can't even have the

free

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to choose their

work places

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, why would he try his best to advance his field

.

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, my aunt decided to give up the admired job ascribed to high incomes and

honors

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, because there were so many restrictions

instead

. In common cases, these workers are associated with our

livings

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. That's the reason why I opine that they shouldn't be bothered by any descriptions. In conclusion,

teachers

and

doctors

have to be free from any limitations because it can lessen their

motivations

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to

work

harder

altough

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although

there are so many difficulties having to reach

to

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therapists or educators in the

country sides

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.