You had a meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write to a local newspaper to give the feedback. In your letter, you should say: where the restaurant located what you had for the meal why do you recommend this restaurant to others.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to give a tremendous review of a restaurant named Bayleaf which is located in Cranbrook.I went there

last

month with family and friends to celebrate my birthday. The hall was already organized for our group.I ordered some Punjabi cuisine

along with

the special dessert, and I gave them instructions to not put spices into our food as we do not like to have many spicy dishes. They followed the same and present it to us. We enjoyed our meal, especially, the dessert was delicious, we never had

such

a taste . Our group had a great time over there . I strongly recommend

this

place to everyone, as I know, that people want to get their food ready as per their taste and

this

restaurant is good in that, in fact, with your food you enjoy the good music which makes you feel relaxed. I am sure people will find

this

a good place to spend time with their friends and family. Yours Faithfully, Sukhwinder Kaur Ranu

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7 paragraphs

176 words

8.50

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