you live near a public school. the school has asked local residents to help with the maintenance of school buildings and play area. Write a letter to the principal. in your letter, -explain why you would like to help -tell them how you can help -let them know when you are available
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to respond to your request that you are looking for an inhabitant who can protect the school and its infrastructure.
The reason why I am so interested in supporting the preservation of college is that my children are studying there and they are all satisfied with the quality of education.
Moreover
,it produces future doctors,teachers and engineers.That is
why I would like to shoulder this
responsibility.
I have a construction company that is
called Pasha.I suggest that I can reconstruct the parts of the college which are needed to be repaired.I will do it reasonably price
.Correct your spelling
priced
Furthermore
,the materials which will be used for school will be free.
Recently,I have been overburdened,therefore
,I hardly find time to come back home,however
,the project is about to be completed.If we do not confront any problems,we will finish next month.After ,that I will be free to discuss it with you.
I look forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully
Malik Maliki.Submitted by malikli.malik1995 on
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task response
The letter addresses the main points but lacks specificity and detail in some areas. More specific examples and details would improve task response.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure of the letter is generally clear, but the greeting and closing could be more formal and appropriate for a letter to the principal of a school.
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