The government must ensure that citizens have a healthy diet, while ithers think this is an individuals' duty. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Being healthy is everyone’s right which should be accommodated by the

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as the authority of the area. To achieve the condition of health, there are some paths that

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could take and a healthy

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is one of them.

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unarguable that a healthy

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will give a positive impact on all human beings,

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matter brings different opinions from society. Some

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believe that

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the

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others say that

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a personal responsibility. I strongly agree that

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treatment is not the

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’s business and I’ll explain the reason for it in my essay. First of all, we must acknowledge the fact that the best way to change somebody’s behaviour is through their own willingness. A Healthy

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is not the one stop at the time treatment which would need

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discipline to be implemented. Eventually, discipline will come if the person is having a strong will to do it.

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, athletes will be more focused on their training if they have a goal that triggers their willingness. Without willingness that triggers the sense of purpose,

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focus will not come.

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personal need is the key factor to drive a healthy

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. In another case, there are

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who do not really know about the importance and steps to do a healthy

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case,the

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has a responsibility to educate them. The reason for it is that the

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has the moral obligation to protect and endure its

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. Even like that, the final decision to conduct a healthy

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is still in

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’s hands, not in the

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. As the benchmark, we can see the precedent of a condom campaign

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being conducted in several developing countries to slow down the birth rate. No matter how much effort that authority gave, the final decision to use a condom or not is in every person’s hands.

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, the ruler does not have any right to force

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to do something, so do it with a healthy

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. To wrap things up, the

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has the supporting role to ensure the proper knowledge of healthy diets to its

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.

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, the key decision to do

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in everyone’s hands, not the ruler's.

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an individual duty to conduct a healthy

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for their own sake.