The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).
The flow chart illustrates a process of creating garden fertilizer from recycled organic rubbish. A glance at the diagram shows that there are 5 parts, starting with providing a
container
and resulting a
compost as the end.
Correct article usage
apply
According to
the figure, putting water inside a plastic container
, that
has been provided before is the first step. Correct pronoun usage
which
While
the container
is fulfilled by
some water, a number of waste is added. Change preposition
with
This
stage, pay attention that all of Change preposition
At this
that is
organic such
as newspaper, grass, or food. In addition
, manage the volume of waste probably 15 cm for every layer. When it is done, nitrogen and hot water are mixed together with
all material inside.
Moreover
, before leaving it for a long time, do not forget to close the container
in order to that there is no any
material can enter including air. Correct quantifier usage
apply
Subsequent
stage is to wait for approximately 6 months where in Add an article
The subsequent
this
stage the process of heating involves. Finally
, the compost are
produced and get ready to Change the verb form
is
Correct your spelling
utilize
Add a missing verb
be utlize
utlize
in Correct your spelling
utilised
garden
,Add an article
the garden
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words container with synonyms.
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