The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).
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The flow chart illustrates a process of creating garden fertilizer from recycled organic rubbish. A glance at the diagram shows that there are 5 parts, starting with providing a
container
and resulting
a
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compost as the end.
According to
the figure, putting water inside a plastic
container
,
that
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has been provided before is the first step.
While
the
container
is fulfilled
by
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some water, a number of waste is added.
This
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stage, pay attention that all of
that is
organic
such
as newspaper, grass, or food.
In addition
, manage the volume of waste probably 15 cm for every layer. When it is done, nitrogen and hot water are mixed
together with
all material inside.
Moreover
, before leaving it for a long time, do not forget to close the
container
in order to that there is no
any
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material can enter including air.
Subsequent
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stage is to wait for approximately 6 months where in
this
stage the process of heating involves.
Finally
, the compost
are
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produced and get ready to
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utilize
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be utlize
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utlize
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utilised
in
garden
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,
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words container with synonyms.
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