The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
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The given maps illustrate changes that will take place in the site of Norbiton in the future compared with the current
area
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. Looking at the
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that all factories will be replaced with housing.
In addition
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, roads will be extended and reconstructed for additional
facilities
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. Now, many factories are located in the industrial
area
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surrounding the main roundabout and roads, and these are the only
facilities
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in
this
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area
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.
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, farmland located in the northern
area
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of the town does not contain any
facilities
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.
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, future development is now planned in detail, and it is expected that there will be remarkable alterations in the
area
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.
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, the main roads will be extended throughout the town and they will
also
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be constructed across the river. A large new housing will be built
at the end
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of the road. Meanwhile, other housing will be built in the southern part of the river overtaking the
area
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previously occupied entirely by factories, and
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extra
facilities
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will be made in
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area
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. To be specific, shops and a medical centre will be constructed near the roundabout, and a playground and school will be built adjacent to the new housing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, facilities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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