The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned

future development of the site.
The given maps illustrate changes that will take place in the site of Norbiton in the future compared with the current
area
. Looking at the
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that all factories will be replaced with housing.
In addition
, roads will be extended and reconstructed for additional
facilities
. Now, many factories are located in the industrial
area
surrounding the main roundabout and roads, and these are the only
facilities
in
this
area
.
Furthermore
, farmland located in the northern
area
of the town does not contain any
facilities
.
However
, future development is now planned in detail, and it is expected that there will be remarkable alterations in the
area
.
Firstly
, the main roads will be extended throughout the town and they will
also
be constructed across the river. A large new housing will be built
at the end
of the road. Meanwhile, other housing will be built in the southern part of the river overtaking the
area
previously occupied entirely by factories, and
then
extra
facilities
will be made in
this
area
. To be specific, shops and a medical centre will be constructed near the roundabout, and a playground and school will be built adjacent to the new housing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, facilities with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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